Thread: Poem I wrote..kinda depressing..

Ok, I got bored and decided to write this I'm sorry if you find it depressing or anything it's just what came to me(I like to write different things)And I'm sorry about the not so nice words but there starred out. Oh, and if it doesn't make sense sorry bout that to like I said it just came to me and I haven't had a chance to really look at it yet. By the way..**None of this is true and it's not about me**

Take a look at my life,
It's such a total he!!,
I should have used the knife,
Spend my time in jail.

My friends think I'm crazy,
Maybe they shoulda spoke before,
My dad thinks I'm lazy,
I'll cover myself before they see more.

My arms are covered in cuts and blood,
They have no idea what my life is like,
To get your face shoved in mud,
I wish they'd take a f~~~in hike.

I hope they let me tell,
All the cruel things I've done,
When you spend your life in he!!,
I hope that you have fun.

I always thought that you would be there,
I hope my wish comes true,
Your a b!tch you never had a care,
I know I was never a friend to you.

Tell me your first thought,
Tell me what you would do,
If I got shot,
I'd lay there because nobody knew.

I lay in a pool of blood,
My clothes all torn,
You were once my best bud,
My body you won't even mourn.

Stay the he!! away from me,
I won't even care if you cry,
You'll never understand what I want you to see,
Just let me go and say good bye.

Very expressive poem. {{{{{{Mini}}}}}}

Originally posted by LocaMami
That gave me goose bumps. Are you ok?

yes I'm fine..like I said it wasn't about me or anybody