If I go away...(poem)

[Mini]

If I go away,
Will you look for me everyday?
If I cried,
Will you be by my side?
If I'm sad,
Will you make me glad?
If I can't see,
Will you be there for me?
If I can't hear,
Will you be near?
If I can't walk,
Will you be there to talk?
If I can't be around,
Will you remember my sound?
If I leave by choice,
Will you miss my voice?
If I die,
Will you cry?
If I'm not there,
Will you care?
If I quit,
Will you make it?


It looked longer on paper but that doesn't matter. I wrote it yesterday, not quite sure why but who knows. I think it's good but then again it is mine;) :D

[nanajoanie]

Oh you are making me 'boohoo' again. This is because Tice just died Christmas Eve. I miss him so bad. Your poetry is wonderful and easy to read and understand:)

[Dolly<3]

That's super Mini. :)

(((((Nana)))))

[stellatj]

I thought it was beautiful and it made me cry too.

[ocvachick]

Awesome poem!!