OMG!!! You have to go read this

[Lasher]

We have a talented voice among us, and hippichic has been so kind as to post her work on her site.


So get your butt over to http://www.ahippiechic.net/kel.htm
and check out the story Kelblend wrote, and don't forget to sign the guest book.




I have to run and hide before Kel realizes I posted this...{{{{{kel}}}}} :D ;)


try it again

[jcw]

link didn't work for me

[kelblend]

&*$*$&#@()@&@)($&)@)&$&)@(( lasher d@@#it I cannot believe you did that with my name!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Lasher]

Ok for jcw I fixed the link



for Kel have a Paxil, the story is good, if it was crap, I would have told ya;)

[kelblend]

see my latest post in hey lasher thread.

[missymommy]

O.k. now I click more and it don't give me no more. I NEED MORE!!!

[kelblend]

I sent the third chap to hippiechic today and I don't think she is on yet. I'm doing the fourth chap now.

[jcw]

Thanks for fixing the link.
kelblend The story is really good. Don't leave us hanging though add some more to it

[missymommy]

Well if you would like to (please, please) you could if you can
send it to mmsmith411@yahoo.com


I loved it so far! :D

[kelblend]

hey missymommy sent you the third chap. I'm still working on typing in the fourth one. lol

[ahippiechic]

Kel, you only told ME not to post it on here! I was good, I didn't! :p I'll get the 3rd chapter up tonight, am late getting back to work from lunch. :rolleyes:


*Told you it was a good story!

[kelblend]

lol@hippie---lasher was supposed to post it, but not my name as the one who did it. I wanted anonymity (sp?) didn't get it. *sigh* Anyway, just sent ya the fourth one.:D

[Lasher]

Originally posted by kelblend
lol@hippie---lasher was supposed to post it, but not my name as the one who did it. I wanted anonymity (sp?) didn't get it. *sigh* Anyway, just sent ya the fourth one.:D

details details:rolleyes:

[missymommy]

I haven't been feeling good and have been zonked out. But I wanted to check and see what was up with this. I read the third chapter from my email and I love it. You know it is good when you have all kinds of ideas about what the writer is thinking yet you can't figure it out just yet.


{{{{{{{{{{Kelblend}}}}}}}}}}

[kelblend]

aw thanks missymommy {{{hugs}}}} Ya have to know that I wrote this thing when i was 21. That's been well....about 13 years ago, so you can laugh but it's not like i wrote it yesterday or anything. lolol

[ahippiechic]

OK, chapters 3 and 4 are up on the webpage now! Don't forget to sign the guestbook! :p

[Jcowgirl77]

good story
bumping up fpr you

[Lasher]

So can i have your autograph kel, before you get all famous?:D

[janelle]

Whoops I thought she was gonna sing. :o :o :o

[Lasher]

Originally posted by Lasher
So can i have your autograph kel, before you get all famous?:D

Well Can I? Do wanna wait til you become famous and have to stan in line:D

[kelblend]

Okay thats it!!!! It's on girl!!! I'm taking ya down!!!!!


rassum frassum arghhhhhhhh

[2manykids]

Really good story kelblend, could we have a famous writer here on bbs:D .Cant wait to read more......

[Lasher]

http://www.sector101.fsnet.co.uk/yahoo/smileys/54.gif

[kelblend]

um hmmmmm I see ya there acting all innocent!!!

[chort1313]

I'm so impressed, kel!!!!!! keep up the GREAT work!

[DOOFIS]

Ok you got me hooked. Can't wait to read more.

[kelblend]

Okay I'll type out the fifth chapter tonight and send it to hippiechic.:D

[janelle]

Kell--you better study the law. If the scum and Lessa are married the scum is entitled to half the estate she inherits. Also, he is entitled to see his child when it's born. He may not have to pay much child support if Lessa has lots of money and he doesn't make much. He will have to pay though. He will find out about all this inheriting and the child, you know that.

This is good though since it will make your story interesting. Just know the sordid facts. Maybe that's where you are going anyway. To be continued. The courts don't care who screwed around on whom. The scum and icky Vicky will live it up on the money and get to see the baby as well. Fun huh?

Then Lessa will fight him in court since she has the money and he doesn't so she will be able to hire the best lawyers. Either they will beat him and she will be rid of the scum or not, all depends on the judge. But if he gets his part of the inheritance he can hire good lawyers as well and the lawyers will end up with all the money from these two fighting each other. Then Lessa will meet the handsome eligable lawyer--- could go on but it's your story. Just be factual or the readers will know. So far so good. :) :) :) ;)

[kelblend]

Whether he knows or not is yet to be seen and doesn't necessarily have to come into play. Does he want to know, will he care if he does know????????????? Heck I haven't read the stupid thing in years, lol. But then if I threw every aspect into it it would be a full-blown novel and not a simple novella. The focus of this isn't really on their relationship-but another one alltogether.

I do know the law lololololol----but how many secrets have been held from the law????

have to read ahead myself now lololololol:D

p.s.--i never said it was good.:)

[janelle]

I think it's good just making it hard for you. LOL The estate makes it interesting. Scum usually rise to the top when money is involved. If you don't want to delve into that aspect it will move along better but then it may ad interest to who ends up with what. Intriquing to see where you are taking it.

[ahippiechic]

Chapter 5 is up now.....I'm slow today! :p

[kelblend]

thanks hippie!!

somebody killed chat lol--no i haven't d/l mirc as of yet. Perhaps it will be up tonight???? ---here's hoping.

[kelblend]

Hey hippie--I just wanted to tell you that you have an awesome site!! Also that I got 85 right and 5 wrong on the stephen king trivia thingee. Not too shabby huh? In the back of the Everything's Eventual book -I believe I read that DT5 is either out or really close to being out. OY!!!!!

[ahippiechic]

I keep hearing Sept. I hope so! I can hardly wait. :p
(That's a good score, Kel!)

[adarkangel]

I love it so far, but I want more more more, lol. Now I am curious to see how this will turn out & I won't be able to because I am finally leaving for MN. tomorrow & I won't have internet for awhile. Aaarrrggg! Not fair! Keep up the good work & if I ever get the nerve, maybe i will put some of my work on here, or not, lol. I am a chicken. :D

[kelblend]

well don't be chicken!!! Good grief woman I'm the biggest one out there!!!!!!

[kelblend]

Before I type out more of this, I wanted to know if anyone actually wanted to read more. I'm not that fast of typer lol. :D

[Lasher]

Originally posted by kelblend
Before I type out more of this, I wanted to know if anyone actually wanted to read more. I'm not that fast of typer lol. :D

TYPE WOMAN!!! TYPE!!!!!:D

[kelblend]

Looks like hippie put up chaps 6 and 7. Thanks Hippiechic!! I can't get in forums regular way so did a search to post this. Hope it works.:D

[ahippiechic]

Finally got in, LOL! Yeah, 6 & 7 are up now! :p

[kelblend]

Okay I just sent chaps 8-11 to hippiechic to put on the site. I don't know when she will have the time to do it, but wanted to let anyone who wanted to read it know it will be there sooner or later.:D

[adarkangel]

I just got back on the boards & wanted to tell you your story is great. It has me wanting more & I am not easy to please.:D I need my next fix!(chapters 8-11):D Keep up the good work!

[adarkangel]

Bumpin cause I don't want to lose this.

[ckerr4]

This si the first time I had a chance to go in and read any of the story, and I GOTTA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!! Dangit, now I'm gonna go to sleep wondering what's up!!!!

:p

[Lasher]

lol she's cruel like that leaves ya hanging:D

[adarkangel]

Bumpin again cause inquiring minds want to know!:D

[kelblend]

Hey I heard that lash!! lololol Now I sent the next chaps 8-11 to hippie, but I don't think she has had the time to post it yet. Hey hippie--they're messing with me now. lmao Did you get it??? It said you got it on the read receipt, but I know your puter was acting up. Let me know if you didn't okay??:D

[blueyez37811]

I saw this thread when it was first posted but my kids had just got home from school so I didnt have time to read the story....Sat down tonight and this post was bumped back up and I sat and read for 30 minutes....This is an awesome story....hurry!! put up the rest of the chapters...I can't stand the wait!

Can't wait to read more!! I bookmarked the page so I can send it to some friends.

[kelblend]

Chapters 8-11 are up thanks to hippie if anyone wants to read them:D

[ahippiechic]

Hey guys! Don't forget to sign the guestbook while you're there, and tell Kel how much ya liked it! :p

[tonieb]

Great story kel!!! I cant wait to read the 12th chapter and moreeeeee!!! I will help u type, lol, jk. :D I will be patient.




Psst! I feel like a moron asking this since I have been a member of this board for a very long time......what does bumping mean on here lol.
And oh, how do I get a picture under my name like ya'll :(

[blueyez37811]

Doh, Tonieb is out of the closet...bout time you posted something...


Bumping means to push the thread back to the top! that way it is not forgotten. To get a pic under your name you need to hit user cp..then hit edit options, then scroll down to bottom and change avatar. Then you have a pic!!

Don't be a stranger...keep postin! You know your my best buddy! Everyone else should have the pleasure of getting to know you!


Now I'm off to read the last couple of chapters and sign the guest book!

[adarkangel]

Whoo Hoo Thanks!

[ravie3]

I just had to say I love your story. It's makes it hard to wait for more.

[adarkangel]

Just out of curiosity, when is the next instalment due?:D

[kelblend]

I don't know adarkangel. lol There isn't much left. It's only 100 typed pages long and you have seen 66 of them. lol

[missymommy]

Bump~:D needing more. {{{{HUGGLES}}}}

[tonieb]

Thanks blue...I hope I did it right lol. Ive posted before but not as much as you do. Love ya!

[tonieb]

Kel, are you going to put up more chapters of your story? I cant wait to read chapter 12 :D

[kelblend]

I'll probably type some more tomorrow. Thanks for all the comments everyone!! Hey even if ya wanna say something not too great about it, go ahead.:D

[MySonNick1]

just bumping, I can't wait to read the next chapter. It's a great story.

[MySonNick1]

bump

[adarkangel]

We want more, we want more! Lol.:D

[tonieb]

I'm having withdrawals! I check everyday for the rest lol.

[kelblend]

Okay I guess I will type of some more lol--I know you all see me on here so I have to lololol:D :) :D

remember though I can send it to hippiechic, but have to wait until she has some time to post it for me. (((hippiechic)))

[kelblend]

Just sent the next two chaps over to hippiechic:D :) :D

[MySonNick1]

Originally posted by tonieb
I'm having withdrawals! I check everyday for the rest lol.


Me too.

[kelblend]

I can't tell if 12 and 13 are posted or not. It looks like it, but all I'm getting is red x's. Can anyone else see them?

[MySonNick1]

Originally posted by kelblend
I can't tell if 12 and 13 are posted or not. It looks like it, but all I'm getting is red x's. Can anyone else see them?



I can only see red X's too

[ahippiechic]

Ok, 12 & 13 are up now. ;) Don't forget to sign the guestbook! :p

[Lasher]

Just to let you know, the butler didn't do it.;)

[kelblend]

and just how do you know that miss lashinator???? lolol:D :) :D oh sure i go to chat and everyone hides. ummhmmmmm i see how ya are.


Hey hippie, thankyou:D (((hugs)))

[MySonNick1]

I still only see red X's. I guess I will keep checking back. I LOVE the story. It keeps me on the edge of my seat.

[kelblend]

hmmm it just worked for me mysonnick1.

i will try to do the rest tomorrow. There reallyisn't much more to it. just a teeny thing really.:D

[MySonNick1]

I finally got to read chapters 12 and 13.....They were very good. Can't wait for the rest.

[MySonNick1]

Just bumping again.....Can you tell us when we are going to get to read the next chapters or the rest? Sorry if I bump this to much or if I seem impatient. Thank you.

Brandy

[MySonNick1]

just bumping...patiently waiting for the next part.:D

[kelblend]

Okay for anyone interested, I just sent chaps 14-16 to hippie. So they will be up when she has time. After that, there is only four more chaps to go. lol:D

[MySonNick1]

Thank you!:D

[ahippiechic]

I just uplaoded the chapters Kel sent.

[Tigerseye0420]

been busy lately but i was curious as to what type of story this is romance...mystery etc??

I dont have time to go read it right now :( but would like to know what kind of story it is so when i go read it i know :)

[kelblend]

Ya know i'm not real sure how I would categorize it. I know that's bad lol. Kind of a mystery, not really romance.
;)

[Tigerseye0420]

Thanks Kel...hope i have time to check it out soon! :)

[kelblend]

You're welcome and thankyou once again Hippie!!

[ahippiechic]

No problem, Kel. It's a really good story! :p

[missymommy]

Waaaaa, the page comes up all white for me. Is it just me?

[kelblend]

I right clicked the page and clicked select all for the heck of it and it was there lol:D HTH

[missymommy]

:D Thank you

[ahippiechic]

ooooooooops! The black background wasn't showing up. Hard to read white text on a white background, huh? Sorry. It's fixed now. :p

[MySonNick1]

:( I can't read chapters 14-16. After chapter 13 there is only a button to go home, not for more. :(

[kelblend]

I see a more button mysonnick1--try it again. Maybe hippiechic was doing something to the page when you tried.:D

[MySonNick1]

WooHoo....I got to read it. :D Thank you.

[MySonNick1]

I think it gets better everytime I read it. You are very talented. If it was a book, I would have bought it already. :D

[Ghetto_Gurl]

la dee dah.....waiting for more KELBLEND AND HIPPIE....wanna find out what happens after chapter 16!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!! great story kel!!

[kelblend]

haha lol---i think i might just type out the rest tomorrow and get it over with.:D

[ahippiechic]

If my server doesn't stop acting up, no one is gonna be able to see it, 'cuz I'm gonna toss it out the window! :mad: And in a related vent, the new version of V-bulletin sux!

[kelblend]

Okay just sent the rest of it to Hippie--if her server is behaving. This is weird but I"m just now feeling really nervous having it all on there. Go figure:D :D :D

[MySonNick1]

I can't wait to read the rest of it. I love the story. I wish I could write good stories like this one. I can't write stories at all. But I do look forward to reading the rest. Thank you Kel for letting us read it and thank you Hippie for posting it so we could read it.

[kelblend]

hey mysonick1---if ya wanna i'll send ya the rest in an email. Thanks for the compliments. It made me feel good. I don't think it too good---but then I read soooo much that anything I write pales in comparison ya know?? One day lmbo who knows???:rolleyes:

[MySonNick1]

Originally posted by kelblend
hey mysonick1---if ya wanna i'll send ya the rest in an email. Thanks for the compliments. It made me feel good. I don't think it too good---but then I read soooo much that anything I write pales in comparison ya know?? One day lmbo who knows???:rolleyes:




You would do that for me? You are so sweet. If you want to send it to me, My E-Mail is MySonNick3@aol.com. You don't have to send it though, I can be patient. I seriously think it is a great story. I usually only read romance books, but if this was a book I would buy it. You are very creative.

Brandy

[Tasha405]

BuMp!

[Ghetto_Gurl]

doing the BUMP....yeahhhhhhhhhhhhh

[Ghetto_Gurl]

bumping to 1st page cuz YOU DO HAVE TO READ THIS!!!!!!!

[ahippiechic]

Did everyone read the ending?? If not, GO READ IT! :p

[kelblend]

soooo hippie did ya like it???;) be brutal now!!:D

[tonieb]

WOW! That story was great! You are so talented. Have u written anymore?

[kelblend]

Originally posted by tonieb
WOW! That story was great! You are so talented. Have u written anymore?

WEll thankyou very much!!:D I've started a few, but haven't finished them. :rolleyes:

[adarkangel]

I finally found this again & I get this error:
Not Found
The requested URL /kel.htm was not found on this server.
Apache/1.3.26 Server at ahippiechic.net Port 80


Now I am going to go nuts! I never got to read past chapter 11. Help!!!!:( :( :(

[Ghetto_Gurl]

i think hippie pulled it from her site

[kelblend]

hey adarkangel if you want the rest i could send it to ya. :)

[ahippiechic]

Kel asked me to remove it as she's thinking about publishing it. I have it in my email if you want me to send it to ya.

[ahippiechic]

Duh! guess I shoulda read ALL the replies before posting, huh? LOL!

[kelblend]

still thinking...... NOT lmao